Sunday, October 16, 2011

Open Prompt #3


1970. Choose a character from a novel or play of recognized literary merit and write an essay in which you (a) briefly describe the standards of the fictional society in which the character exists and (b) show how the character is affected by and responds to those standards. In your essay do not merely summarize the plot.


Society in the 1960s was one driven by consumerism and conformity. This is seen especially in Edward Albee’s play the “American Dream” when looking at Mommy. Her actions in the play are clearly reflection of the currents society’s value of consumerism and peer approval.
The 1960s were a trying time for Americans, with the end of the cold war almost a decade prior and the start of the cold war. Events such as the Cuban Missile Crisis created an environment of constant fear of nuclear destruction. Possibly in order to escape the country turned even more towards materialism than ever before. It also began to value the opinions of others even more, allowing what others do virtually make all their decisions for them.
Mommy epitomizes both values of consumerism and the need for approval by peers; this is seen in the details chosen by Albee. Mommy is striving to attain what she believes is the American dream but in reality is nothing but a shell of it, a perception. This is seen in acceptance and keenness toward the young man, who Albee chooses to be visually appealing and young two things that were valued at this time. Another example is how with some hesitation at first Mommy accepts Mrs. Barker’s view of what color the hat is. There is also significance in the color Albee chose it to be, beige.  A color that some may say is bland but also one that is associated with a higher class versus the color wheat. Mommy submits to the pressures of society though with a underlying feeling of never being able to truly be satisfied.
Albee’s character Mommy in the play “American Dream” epitomizes the value places on consumerism and societal approval in 1960s America.

3 comments:

  1. I like your view point but I think you can have a stronger conclusion, your use of diction is fine and language is good too. And pretty much touch on the prompt, try to express your view point a little more, and this will turn out to be a great essay.

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  2. A tad bit short, but that is understandable. I like that you bring in other knowledge of the time period besides just what's in the play. It's a little difficult to tell if paragraphs are being used, but all in all you seem to be spot on with your structure of the prompt.

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  3. Overall this is a good essay. To be honest, I am not sure if you focus a little bit too much on the back round you gave of the 1960s. Looking at your essay, that information along with the introduction is almost half your essay. While it does add to the essay and makes the reader more knowledgeable of the time period you are speaking of, I do not know if it takes away from your actually evidence.

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